A beautiful masterpiece that will be passed down through generations; a summary of everything we stand for as a human race, and everything we hope to achieve in the future.

The intro was really great, but it didn't really build enough tension. Even in full orchestral parts, it's okay to use electronic risers and subs. 4.5/5

The first drop felt a bit boring, and imo the lead completely failed the rest of the soundscape. 3/5

The build-up to the second drop was about as good as the beginning, but 2:52-3:45 just felt really tedious and didn't build up enough for the time that was taken. If it had been left to a few phrases, it could have worked, but it just took too long for me. 4/5

I'm sorry, but the second drop just didn't work for me. The chordstacks were too small, the drums weren't mixed in quite right, and the sidechain is just a bit off. The collection of everything being a bit off was just too unsettling to me, but at least I can see that a lot of work went into it. So I give it a 3.5/5.

Overall, I feel like this is a pretty good song, but the majority of it is just too overworked, underworked, or tedious. Also, the leads in the drops don't fit in very well; the build-ups and tone of everything else implies a more ambient, reverby lead, but what you used felt jarring and out-of-place. Keep improving, though! With some more work in sound design and transitioning, I'm sure you could make much better music.

The intro had a surprisingly nice mix! It built up a pretty good soundscape The one main thing it could use is having a melody that sticks to the chords. I think the other main thing this lacks is buildup FX and impacts, like cymbals, reverse cymbals, white noise sheets, and snare trails. Try implementing that, and everything will probably sound a ton better, and help the quality of the transitions. But good work! This was a huge improvement, and I hope you keep improving.

Really nice song, but the percussion felt a bit off. It felt like it was supposed to be more intense, but couldn't quite reach that level. Otherwise, nice song. Might need a bit more tension building at 1:57 though; just a violin isn't enough. Try getting some woodwinds and violas in the action.